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Ravenpaw Stays Part 5

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"What is this!!?" Bluestar demanded. "It-it's my sister's firstborn.., she wanted it to become a warrior." A look of worry shone in Fireheart's eyes. "Come with me!" She spat, and led Fireheart to her den.
"And we thought we had secrects." Graystripe whispered into Ravenmist's ear. "Yeah.." Ravenmist stared blanky where Fireheart had been. "Are kits are gonna be here any day now.." Ravenmist spoke quietly. "Yeah.." Suddenly, Ravenmist felt a weight on his tail. He whipped his head around to see a ginger and white kit. "I'm gonna be the best hunter in the clan! Even better than Sandstorm!" sqeauled Brightkit.
"Maybe so Brightkit, but I don't think tails count." purred Graystripe. "When are my denmates gonna be here?" Brightkit mewed impatiently. "Soon." Ravenmist promised. "Really!!?" Excitment shone in the kit's eyes. "Yes." "I gotta go tell Cinderkit!" Brightkit mewed, reffering to her older sister who was about to become an apprentice. The excited kit ran off to the nursery. ------------At that instant, Bluestar walked out of her den, and leaped onto the highrock. There was no need to do the call, since all the cats were already in the clearing. Ravenmist noticed that Sandpaw, Dustpaw, Cinderkit, and Brackenkit were looked well groomed and eager. Must be there ceromonys thought Ravenmist.
"We have two new warriors to name." Bluestar began. Dustpaw looked proud, sitting next to his father. Sandpaw looked at him then looked down. Her father had been Redtail.
   "Sandpaw. Whitestorm has mentored you well. From this moment on you shall be known as Sandstorm. All of Sandstorm's disapointment seemed to fade, as she licked Bluestar's shoulder. She walked proudly over to the warriors. "Dustpaw you have been mentored well. From this moment on you shall be known as Dustpelt. Dustpelt stood proud and licked Bluestar's shoulder, then went to join Sandstorm.  "SANDSTORM, DUSTPELT" "And now we need to name two apprentinces. "Cinderkit, Brackenkit, come up onto the highrock. At once the kits began to walk. Cinderkit climbed up eagerly. Once they were with Bluestar, she continued. "Brackenkit. You have been a good kit for the past six moons. From now until you recieve your warrior name, you shall be known as Brackenpaw. You will be mentored by Graystripe. " Steadily, Brackenpaw walked forward to lick Graystripe's shoulder.
Cinderkit. You have been a good kit for the past six moons. From now until you recieve your warrior name, you shall be known as Cinderpaw. You will be mentored by Fireheart. " Shaking, Cinderkit walked forward to lick Fireheart's shoulder. "In other news, Ashkit, Fernkit, Thornkit, and Brightkit you will have a new denmate." The white kit Fireheart had been carring stepped out from behind Bluestar. "Brindleface has agreed to nurse Fireheart's kit. From now on he will be known as Cloudkit."
Everbody seemed calm after the meeting, except Ravenmist, who swore Tigerclaw was glaring at him. Suddenly, Brindleface rushed out of the nursery. "Ravenmist!!! Your kits are coming!!!"
Yay part 5! srry it hasn't been out for a while *hides from angry fans * i forgot who mentored dustpaw... it's been so long since i read the book lol
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dbzfangirl77's avatar
dustpaw's father? isn't he dead or something? anyway great job! i love the idea of ravenpaw staying and having kits!